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Am on page 20! Am I in the lead? :) So far, very few gramatical/spelling errors founds. Story line is promising.. though entry to the House of Baack is a bit over the top, and painful.
Thanks Gary. There's good reasons for the wacky entrance into the House of Baack, but I can see where a little more explanation up front is needed.
Page 50! So far so good.. things are gelling nicely. Getting explanation of House of Baack. Am a little lost with all the characters, but that is just my own inability and atrophy from being a dad (seriously!)
Things are going to start getting even more dicey in the plot soon. Yikes!!! You're way in the lead Gary, btw. (I think)
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